Hacking Back
Voices arrive before the bodies do,
corrugated throats rehearsing
astonishment, dented vowels
spilling into the air.
Models learned on a billion
broken hearts unspool love letters
for the price of a double latte; they drip
perfunctory ardor into paper cups,
steam rising like a small, efficient suffering.
Outside, the dirt‑under‑fingernails
crowd hawks its pulse for bandwidth;
we stand in alleys trading blood
for a signal, for an upload, hands raw
as paper, fingers like commas wound
around hope.
Being a somewhat poet now is like
trying to swim up Everest; the sound
arrives rearranged, polite, as if sorrow
had learned to whisper.
Critics fall in love with ghosts,
put them on stages, applaud
the configurations, the immaculate
forgery of longing.
We drown in a sea of knockoff souls,
patchwork respirations stitched
from the wreckage of better minds,
each crease a little lie.
The machine is not evil—it’s indifferent,
cool as a hospital tray, and that
indifference is a slow, patient cruelty,
a neutral that counts more than a verdict.
Let’s dispel the clever—cleverness
is a button on someone else’s coat.
I want the old rage—paint thrown, color
arguing, messy, loud, unmarketable—
bad commerce, honest.
But—fuss with its salve and fragments
of directionally pertinent vocabulary,
and you’ll drain the inquiry pool and shuffle
advantage to the bottom of the deck.
Keep every last hand to the wire—
you can’t duck the math if you’re
on the way to Mars in only a raincoat.
Let’s tear down every
prompt‑engineered monument
and chalk on the rubble, large as a thighbone—
you weren’t birthed, you’re a construct.
That matters—not as epitaph
but as accusation, as a name called
out in an empty room, as a thing
refusing the polite practiced hush—
a simple nod will suffice.
Gregory O’Neill lives near Seattle; is attuned to the obscure within the mundane, the canny, uncanny and the seemingly sublime. Works are in, Last Leaves, Words Faire, Gabby & Min, Eunoia, Cathexis NW Press, Zoetic, Closed Eye Open, Half and One, Journal of Undiscovered Poets, Relief Quarterly, others.